Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people say we need to lie when we don't want to break the relationships with others or when we don't want to hurt someone, but most of the lies are revealed someday, and when others find out the lies, our relationship with them will be much worse and other people will get shocked seriously. So we should always try to tell the truth. The ensuing paragraphs will explain more about this in detail.
First, it is impossible for us to tell a lie only once. Those who has depended on a lie once will know how useful it is to temporarily keep their relationships with others safe. They will again tell a lie. Their lies will be accumulated too many for them to remember all, and someday they will say mistakenly something contradicting to their lies that they told before. Then lies are revealed. For example, I have heard about a classmate of my brother in his high school. She was always lying about her exam scores. One day one of her classmate asked her about her overall grades of 2nd grade. The reply she made contradicted to the sum of her exams, which led the classmate to find out she was lying. As we can see from this example, we cannot completely hide the truth if we lie.
Second, sometimes people tell a lie in order to hide some serious problems which they think no one can solve and other people will get seriously shocked at. However, also in this case we should tell the truth, because other people may be able to accept the truth and find the way to solve the problem. I show you one clear example that my brother told me. In his laboratory, one researcher failed to demonstrate a hypothesis, which will be an important part of his senior's paper. He thought the senior's theory was false, but he couldn't tell it because the senior is admitted as the promising researcher in his lab. But because of his hiding the fact that his experiment has failed, the senior's paper wasn't accepted by journals. In this case, he should have told the senior about the failure in his experiment because by doing so the senior could have found out another way to correct his mistake.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48031496063 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37695598282 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509186351706 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6450317264 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.35 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927314822383 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333671823528 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360088739071 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067141400985 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177294409962 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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