Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today we have a lot of news resources, like the Internet, TV, and radio programs. In this age of information, the ability to explore necessary and accurate information in limited time is indispensable. I disagree with the idea that a person must get information from many different news resources. In many cases, doing this will be just a waste of time.
First of all, the news resources are frequently duplicated in terms of the content. The way journalists gather information in order to publish the news article will be alike, so naturally the news resources and announcements will be almost the same. For example, I sometimes hear surprising news from some of my friends. Then the first thing I do is search the Internet for the articles related to the news. Because of my curiosity I browse many different websites, but after opening a few articles, I always find that different websites mention almost the same story. Thus, searching for many different sources is totally a waste of time.
Secondly, although there are many publishing and broadcasting services, just a few of them are reliable. Many other companies sometimes provide us inaccurate information.
For example, the other day, when I was checking an online news webpage, I found some articles about the murder by a medical student. Because I am a medical university student, I couldn’t believe that medical students who should take care of patients committed such a heinous crime. I also apprehended about the future of him because those who committed a murder are deprived of the right to become a doctor. However, the next day, when I talked about the accident with one of my friends, he let me know that the murderer is not a medical student. Thus, as you can see from this example, there are a lot of unreliable information, especially on the Internet. So it is rather important to have the capacity to differentiate between precise resources and false ones than to collect many news resources.
As I mentioned in the previous paragraphs, there are a lot of duplicated, and irresponsible articles. Sometimes it is the case that only a few articles have precise information. So we shouldn’t indiscriminately search for news resources without considering deeply.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05361930295 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03773818609 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530831099196 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2480465755 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7619047619 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212249714019 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663241975283 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962820023805 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116083117425 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100147884501 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.