Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently the way we live has changed so much. Many of us have access to advanced devices, and people from all over the world are connected via the Internet, and some young people are trying to cope with social problems. These new lifestyles and activities are mainly due to young people's decisions to do some research about developing new technology, to introduce new ideas from overseas, and to participate in the activities changing the society.
First, young people tend to make our lives more conveniently. Today many of them are interested in scientific technology, and are trying hard to come up with better electrical equipments. For example, the development of apple pencils, with which we can write letters and figures on tablets, and airdrop, by which we can send files to nearby people without Internet connection, has made the introduction of digital textbooks viable.
Second, young people have stronger connection to foreign people than before. This enables us to share a variety of ideas and cultures all over the world. For example, medicine is so advanced in the US, and nowadays many doctors spend some years working as a doctor in the States. They learn a lot about the diagnosis protocol, the education of residents in the hospitals, and so on.
Finally, many young people today commit themselves to various activities to change the society. For example, some students were engaged in the demonstrations when the president of Japan are trying to change the constitution and to introduce army again. Also, actually I participated in the conference in Russia, which is about air pollution. Many students gathered there and discussed seriously about the problem. These are the evidences that young people think about the future.
As you can see from the previous paragraphs, young people try to change the society better, and they have significant influence on the future of society as a whole.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15286624204 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74393692077 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5526932471 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.125 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173917206218 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057148666059 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667890089799 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113158307884 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693211966511 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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