Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Due to the advancement in scientific technology and the trend toward globalization, young people today have to acquire many kinds of skills in order to succeed. So it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
First of all, today, teachers impose a lot of tasks on their students. It is almost impossible for young people to spare full energy for each of the tasks. They have to think about how much they spend on a certain task. For example, my university forced me to submit about two reports every week. I recognized the crisis where I am, and I decided to plan the amount of time I spend on each homework. If I hadn’t organized a schedule and just had tackled each task, I wouldn’t have finished them in time. From my experience, I strongly felt that we need the ability to manage our own schedule.
Secondly, young people today are curious about many subjects in university. Everybody has some special subject which he or she is especially interested in. But young people shouldn’t spend all their time on such subjects. There are a lot of subjects to learn. In my experience, I was so curious about physiology. But I had exams on other subjects such as microbiology, immunity, and anatomy on the same day. I didn’t make a plan and I was just studying about physiology. Without notice, there left little time I can spend on other subjects, and finally I failed other subjects. Nowadays many students fall into similar situations. In order to ameliorate this situation, organizing a schedule can deter our excessive curiosity and distribute our time to each subject evenly. Curiosity is an indispensable motivation for study, but in order to get all credits, we sometimes have to control it.
Thirdly, if we cannot make a proper plan, we cannot finish every task in time on each day, and we end up staying up late at night. Staying up late will make us difficult to maintain good health. Actually, In the morning, I get up with full energy, and I am so motivated that I always make my daily schedule too busy to finish. Because of this, I sometimes catch a cold, and this consequently leads to loss of efficiency. We shouldn’t be too greedy when we make a daily schedule.
As you can see from the previous paragraphs, it is definitely helpful for young people to have the ability to organize their plan so that they can efficiently finish their own tasks and can acquire new skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73831775701 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80708134032 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509345794393 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4928790083 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65384615385 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145097666827 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438754401046 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754597325681 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107703682494 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739248230066 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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