Nowadays, human interactions are becoming more and more complicated; therefore, drawing a line to indicate what's good or bad about telling the truth, is getting harder. Still, I firmly believe honesty is the best policy. However, short term benefits of lying might seem intriguing, but in the long run, it will make you miserable. Two reasons to substantiate my point of view are elaborated in the following essay.
First, being truthful helps your reputation. To put it in a more vivid picture, people tend to deal with the ones who are famous because they provide a reliable service. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About a year ago, our government filtered the Telegram application and put a lot of efforts into advertising a new national social media. Although they had provided plenty of exciting features; like free bandwidth and cloud storage to support this product, people decided to keep using Telegram despite all the hardships. Because they were aware of the fact that Telegram wouldn't sell their private information to the government. The number of telegram users dropped drastically at first, but people helped each other to bypass the filter. After four or five months, everybody was provided with the tools to cross the restriction made by the regime; as a result, the Iranian Telegram society became as same as before.
Moreover, honesty will soothe your mind. To clarify more, a person who lies is always worried about the fact that others would find out about the falsehood of his Words. Therefore, he prepares more lies to support the last ones, and this continues. On the other hand, a guy who tells the truth is not concerned with getting caught. I illustrate my point with an example. When I was in the second grade of elementary school, I got an average mark on a dictation exam. I was a good student and didn't expect that grade; so, I cried and asked the teacher to give me a better mark. I knew she wouldn't accept my plea, so I lied that my parents will get angry and will punish me. She changed my grade but also wrote a note that said she had altered it to stop my mom from hitting me. After I got home, my mom asked me about my mark, and I showed her the paper from a far distance so she couldn't read the note. She realized that I was hiding something and asked me to bring it closer. Eventually, my mom saw it and got furious not because of my mark but because I lied to her and my teacher. She also told me that it's alright to get a bad score because the mistake is an inevitable aspect of being a human. But it's also crucial to take responsibility for what you have done.
In conclusion, taking all the reasons mentioned above and explanations into account, I'm of the opinion that integrity is vital in our communications. It represents you as a trustworthy person, and also you don't have to be concerned with the revelation of your lies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2394.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63953488372 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59372709188 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 759.6 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8141174611 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955151336734 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281825365536 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348356336607 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492802979886 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024856690192 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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