Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. The amount of money you earn is the most important reason for choosing a job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When people choose a job, they take into consideration certain criteria. Moreover, they determine their jobs according to these criteria. It is very important whether she likes the job for some people while they are choosing a job; however, the amount of the money you earn is the most significant reason for a choosing a job. I feel that how much money you will earn is the most crucial reason to prefer a job due to aspects of affording needs and investing. I will explore these aspects in the following essay.
The first reason is that people meet their needs through the salaries they receive. People have basic needs such as nutrition and accommodation they have to meet. Therefore, they do not prefer to work in a job which does not pay sufficient wage to meet their own needs and the needs of the family. In addition, people also need some activities to motivate them. It is fact that money is required to do these activities. As a result, the amount of money is the most important element to choose a job.
The second reason is that people want to make savings. Business life of today and running are both physically and psychologically exhausting people. In this case, it causes people to want to stop working without waiting retirement. On the other hand, this is often done by people who saved enough money. Thus, people want to work in jobs that give a considerable amount of salary. As a result, money has a very important impact on job choice.
To sum up, supplying needs and making saving are only two main reasons why the amount of the money you earn is the most significant reason for a choosing a job. People should decide on what to expect from their future are concerned, and they should start design their lives accordingly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67419354839 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51501422781 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496774193548 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5301171766 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2631578947 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298522905195 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991665697299 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116837812555 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19893151363 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924791724593 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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