Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For any business to become successful, it needs to spend a lot of money on advertising.
The ultimate purpose of a business is to sell products and services to earn profits; which every company has to make its product known to the public in order to attract them, for which advertising can be a critical mean. In this regard, this question arises if it is necessary for companies to spend lots of money on their advertisement or not. I personally believe that it is a vital activity in marketing and should be spent enough money on it in order to become progress in business for two main reasons which will be demonstrated in the following essay.
Advertising is a crucial element for making people aware of one's products which is important in order to sell it to people. More precisely, when manufacturers produce a new product, people have no idea about that in order to buy it, thus the company has to publicize its product. The best way to do so is to advertise about the product; using social media, websites, advertising campaigns, newspapers, and magazines. To put in simple, these are some advertising elements that are used by the public, so unknown product would be known by people when they read newspapers, magazines, and watch for example television. Moreover, in today's world, people are connected with each other in a giant chain, thus once some people read about a specific new product in websites, they will talk about it with their friends, families, and even sometimes for mass people. As a result, more and more people will become aware of that product leading to attracting more customers. Announcing people about products can become a vital factor in the failure or success of especially new-in-marketing companies in this sniff competitive business world. To put in simple, when a company starts to produce products, no one knows about it, thus a little neglect in publicizing products can have bad consequences; because people are not aware of the new company, thus the other well-known corporations would sell products, even though they are well-qualified or not. Consequently, the unknown company would probably go bankrupt. Therefore, advertising can take companies far above the failing line into success by making a business's service known by a crowd of people.
Indeed, advertisement is the only means of modifying and improving services based on people's reaction to that product resulting in finding the right buyers fitting to their products. As a matter of explanation, first that a product or service comes out, it has some pros and cons; people would buy it and they would increase or refute buying based on they liked its features or not. Now, here the advertising plays an imperative role because companies would find out what peoples like and what they do not like about their product, so they would be able to sell more products by eliminating drawbacks and improving the product into user-friendly manner. Thus, after a while, the product will be changed into what people want, and that is the time that the manufacture has reached its potential and true customers. To illustrate, Apple, a productive and successful company, has used advertising since the start of giving services to people, and every time updates its software and hardware, based on what people want. Had not worked on the advertisement, Apple could not have reached such many audiences and sailing. Besides, Apple's profits outweigh far much the money it has spent on ads, so it is not a waste of money and once the company flourishes the whole money will be back as profits.
To sum up, companies by advertising not only make their products well and spread known for people but also result in gathering suitable customers for their specific product. Therefore, the advertising leads into the best and more sailing because of aforementioned approaches; the more companies sell the more profit they gain, thus it is crucial to spend much money on that in order to seek desired success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, even so, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3254.0 1977.66487455 165% => OK
No of words: 655.0 407.700716846 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9679389313 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05894927669 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76447364799 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435114503817 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1019.7 618.680645161 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4388104172 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.909090909 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7727272727 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0886581611592 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343719084889 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407287304445 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773418095121 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514921620971 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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