As humans there some aspect of us that needs to be given attention. Like in the case of our social life, we need some level of entertainment to help us easy out some level of tension in other to makes feel relaxed and refreshed. The prompt avert that being present at live performance is more interesting than watching the same event on television. I most likely agree to the above statement because of three reasons.
First of all live performance gives room of representing the true character of the actors who perform on stage. For instance, I was privileged to attend a live performance show in my locality, I had an opinion about my favorite actor as one who was arrogant. But, on getting to the arena for the event, I noticed that I actually had a wrong impression about my favorite actor being that seein him perform on stage live has real and in a natural state that you admire his personality so easily. I must confess that since then, my conception about my favorite actor changed that day. I went home fulfilled and entertained because of my new discovery about my actor. This was achieved as result of having act live on stage.
Secondly, some events shown on television be revisited in other to enjoy particular scene. For example, I love the movie lord of the ring, and usually there is a particular scene that interest more the action that took place in the place of the king. Each time I recall that particular scene it reminds of past kings how objective and relational they were to us their subjects. This makes me entertained and at the same time make my day, But I think if it were to be something acted on stage I would not have been able to visit that interesting scene that reminds of my king. With this in mind it becomes something of interest to watch some actions on television because, I always go back to it and get entertained. But, on the other hand, it is not the case for live performance.
Thirdly, both live performance and actions presented on the television are important. This because I feel as humans what might be conducive for me may not be same to others. Giving the above description, one can actually choose which is more entertaining and enjoyable.
To conclude, I mostly likely agree to the above statement because of the reasons giving above since it could be either ways because there are time I feel interested about live performance, and there are also time that I feel watching series on television is more productive and entertaining.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As humans there some aspect of us that nee...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I had an opinion about my favorite actor as one who was arrogant. But, on getting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6388261851 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66406432205 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489841986456 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7873523414 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.15 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227259540976 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070430888844 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710666752402 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124255920982 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216762044681 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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