With the development of society, people nowadays are facing lots of difficulties, and People often hold different views on whether young people should have the ability to plan and organize. Based on personal experience of my life, I strongly contend that youngsters should and must cultivate the planning skill to deal with complex modern life.
First of all, owing to the rapid development of modern technology, people should deal with lots of tasks at the same time. For example, as a research assistant at school, I am always busy dealing with all kinds of tasks my boss asked me to do. To be more precise, I have to prepare for the meeting with my boss, perform experiments, and tutor the undergraduate at the same time. As a consequence, it is important for me to prioritize which works are more important and make a plan. If I don't have the ability to plan and organize everything under control, I won't be productive and do my job perfectly. Thus, cultivating planning skills makes me more efficient.
Secondly, modern society is full of competitions, so students should learn how to prepare and plan for their future job when they are at school. Take my cousin, Tim as an example. He was an outstanding student studying in computer science, and he knew which career he would like to pursue when he just got into college. Since he had a goal, he came up with a plan to attain this goal. Now, he was hired by Google as a software engineer, which is a very competitive job position. If he wasn't well prepared in his college year, he might not get this dream job.
Last but not least, we should prepare for the future, since we live in a global village, one thing that happened in one country may cause some effects on another. For instance, the outburst of the war in Middle-East Asia, will increase the oil price globally and finally raise the unemployment rate in South-East Asia. Thus, as young people in Thailand, they should save their money when they are working in case of being laid off by the company. What is more, youngsters should learn how to organize their properties and wisely allocate them in the stock market, the debt market and save them in the bank. Since we don't know when will the accident happen, we should plan well at first.
In conclusion, I agree that it is essential to equip young people with planning ability in this complex society. That is to say, life is full of competition, we have lots of tasks to do at the same time, and we can't predict when will the accident happened, so we should be well prepared by equipped with planning skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, what is more, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61086956522 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.558438907 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517391304348 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5324739213 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04761904762 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213732481922 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700783412518 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709505795551 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140844857384 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790245677225 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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