Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It rarely surprises us anymore that in such a fast-developing era, people need to handle a large number abilities to suit the social life. HOwever, more often than not, hordes of poeple are likely to go to extreme to hold that the ability of plan and organize are unnecessary for they will not help people to earn money directlr. Perhaps there is an element in their argument, but I, without hesitation, avocate that the ability of planning and organizing is essential in people’s lives.
First and foremost, what never ceases to enthrall me is that plan and organize ability helps people be more efficient in their work and study so that saving time for people to do more meaningful things. To begin with, making a nice plan will provide people relax time. For example, when people made their plan at the last night and checked them in the morning, they will aware what they should do for the whole day. In addition, the plan will encourage people to complete tasks as soon as possible, becuase then they can enjoy the free time after finishing all the work freely without be disturbed by the worry about unfinished tasks. In this way, poeple will achieve a real good sense and have huge expectation about their everyday lives. Besides, organization is an important factor for success. When people making detailed paln about their life and study, they will be more clear about themselves than those who do not do this. The poeple who are organized will arrage their life based on their needs such as learning a new type of language, visiting a friend and so on, thereby they can do more than those have a messy life and be easier to achieve a success in the future. Therefore, there is no denying that being orginzed a good-planned make it possible for people to enjoy their lives better and even have a brighter future.
Furthermore, good plans and organizations serve as a guantee for important events exerts a considerable fansination on me. If people, in such a complex society, who fell messy when handling a large amount of events both in their work and family can make a comprehensive organization about their life, they may not miss any important events and achieve a real sense of happiness. A recent case concerns my cousin John, who initially always missed his students council meetings becuase of his busy shcool burden, making him depressed and downall the time. Later on, however, with his parents’ encouragement, he started to try to make detailed calendars about his life, an event radically changed his life. At last, John became really organized and remembered everything he need to do and even took the leader position in studnets council for his good behaviour, achieving a real sense of happiness and sel-satisfication. Accordingly, it is appearant that be a orginzed and good-planned person is the first step to achieve greater achievement.
In conclusion, it is true that making money is a necessary thing in people’s lives, but in order to achieve a better success and brighter future, cultiviting the ability to plan and organize should be taken seriously.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 957, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n. Accordingly, it is appearant that be a orginzed and good-planned person is the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2572.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 526.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8897338403 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69088180475 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 823.5 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4448690632 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.368421053 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6842105263 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.89473684211 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203253540613 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776092920051 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375433076096 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134872235304 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432321419915 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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