Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
In the contemporary society, with an increasing attention being paid to the place to live, whether should go to the other city to live has became an extremely debatable and sparked a variety of views among people. Some individuals propose that live in one town, because living in one city can deepen the understanding of a city. However, I disagree with the statement. I believe that move from one place to another. My specific reasons, including examples, are listed as follows.
First, living in more than one city allows you to learn more about urban culture. For example, my Friend Len, he used to live in many cities, and he was very interested in history, so during this period, he kept studying the local culture, so that he even knew more about the local culture and history than the local people, which also led to his excellent record in history.
Second, living in one city make life boring. Seeing the same sights every day, such as the exact location of a park or the number of trees around a school, can make you tired. At this time, you should leave the city and change to a new place to live, which can not only broaden yours intellectual horizon, but also broaden yours life. You can get rid of the unchanged area and relax spirit. For example, at the end of each semester, I will go to another city to enjoy the scenery and relax myself. It not only helps me forget my troubles, but also gives me confidence to look ahead to the next semester.
In a nutshell, based on the above analysis, I firmly uphold my notion that move to one place from another. Owing to the facts that go to the another city from one to one can learn more local culture and live in only one city will make people feel boring.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...should go to the other city to live has became an extremely debatable and sparked a va...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48253968254 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.285758377 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1542172085 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383343439727 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13818410059 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102187001347 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233458042054 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951777334792 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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