Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. In modern society, we often feel powerless to cope with the complex and changeable social environment and various people.It refers to the ability to arrange work quickly in advance and allocate resources reasonably in order to complete certain tasks.
I'm sixteenth years old this year, however, I always feel great pressure around me, such as life pressure, emotional pressure and economic pressure with my family. I also do not know how to do, now he always suspicious of the mentality is particularly heavy, day to day is always cranky, sometimes suddenly happy, sometimes suddenly sad. Sad more than happy. My parents see me so also very uncomfortable, they do not know how to advise me. I lose confidence. I am a very happy, very optimistic girl before, who always give people around him bring happiness and energy.
I think the area where you can improve your organizational skills the most is your relationships. With good interpersonal relationships, there is charisma. Better relationships can lead more people turning to them. Most of the time it is not that you are incompetent, but that you have no friends, no one is willing to listen to you.
Learn to respect and care for others. This is one of the basic human needs. Therefore, to make others feel important, care for others to make them feel warm, give due help to the difficulties of others and comfort for the misfortune of others. so that we can achieve good. Treat people sincerely is to convince people with reason, is a person completely convinced. Make the students feel fair and virtuous. In this way, we can treat the public with good faith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87118644068 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76223558336 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.9091781084 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6315789474 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89473684211 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248640931124 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676610867684 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101646380344 0.0737576698707 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149218817714 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901033084941 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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