Today we are in an age that all surround us to become more developing and more complicated. Consequently, life is changing continuously thus It is important to make a plan for our works or activities in future. In spite of that, other people don't matter about this thesis. this argument will explain the plan' role in our life.
Firstly, let us take a look for business life. As we know the career is essential for our life, which we can create our future by it. Consequently, we should care about its details. So, I see that when you are making a plan for your meetings or anything else that below to your work, It can help you to be a successful person. For example, if you arranged your table with the meetings, and suddenly, you will have work you will be able to cancel it or make it without making any negative effect on your dates.
Another factor is considering is the education perspective. Planning for your lessons or made your way on how to complete your learning program, is very vital to us which can help to study our exams and pass it easily. Otherwise, we may arrange our ideas to make our future clearly without any dilemma that maybe force it. To talk about this point, as it is known that after the high school finish, we should enrol in a university which can learn us about the future, so you should be sure about your way,
The third significant factor, we should not forget that this point can affect our health badly. Due to the pressure of mass life and the accumulated work, we may be sick with blood pressure or heart attacks. To explain that, It is important to mention that the businessmen or the workers who are non-planning their work will force lots of problems which can make them illness easily.
From has been discussed above, from my point of view, Young people need to be organized their future even it was with no achievement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...make a plan for our works or activities in future. In spite of that, other people dont ma...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... future. In spite of that, other people dont matter about this thesis. this argument...
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Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...r people dont matter about this thesis. this argument will explain the plan role in ...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'worked', 'wrought'.
Suggestion: worked; wrought
...e meetings, and suddenly, you will have work you will be able to cancel it or make i...
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Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ion that the businessmen or the workers who are non-planning their work will force lots...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, third, thus, as to, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52058823529 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43549835745 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9928274472 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164144613399 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577656999307 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486326012437 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931810464313 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504949706895 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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