This topic is very popular in our present, how to make from us a wealthy person, because in our life today It is very important to have the money, and the riches take the number one in everything for example in the finical works.
To begin with, let's start in how to earn it, lots of people like celebrities began from the zero to create themselves, by working with small companies or jobs, and when the large companies contacts with them, they will be famous then they start to earn their fortune.
After that, if it is important to have the money you should make your reasons for that, for example, if you want to create a hospital to help the poor, you should earn money in the right way, I know a person who is my friend's father he wanted to make an Iraqi school in Istanbul he collected his wealth and searched for partners with him, then he could to make it which it helped him to earn an extra money, and it was my school.
And, the money can help you to make you a known person, for example, who from us don't know Bill Gates? he is an American businessman also he is a programmer, and he helped Paul Alan to make Microsoft programme, which his wealth reaches to 100.6Billion (USD).
In conclusion, even if the money is everything today and is very important to have it, but you also should have good health,
to keep with your family, and be careful for yourself to not be a greedy person because of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 268.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33208955224 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22451596153 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514925373134 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.1344086022 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.9468151191 48.9658058833 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.5 100.406767564 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.6666666667 20.6045352989 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.45110844103 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144755198033 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736760932214 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492802636212 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076595630872 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575722566101 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 11.7677419355 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.2 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.1575268817 166% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.72 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.0537634409 195% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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