Many scientists believe it would be possible to maintain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible. First, atmospheric

Both the reading and listening are talking about the characterizes of the space, and it is impossible for a human to live on
Mars and the lecture has an opinion that complete the idea, I will talk about it.

First and foremost, according to the reading, they said that life is banned on Mars, while Venus is more appropriate, then they said that the atmospheric pressure in Venus is bigger 90 times that Earth pressure, which if a spacecraft go there it will destroy immediately when it landed. whereas the professor said that is lower than that, and they can land the spacecraft away of the station by 15 Kilometers.

On the second place, the author told us that the Venus atmosphere has a compound variety of the gases, like nitrogen and CO2, but there is no water because of there is no water reservoirs and there is no Oxygen.

Thirdly, in the article told us that about 60% of the sunlight after it hits Venus will bounce to space, also because of the clouds the light will not reach to the surface, and it will not be there electric to charge their mobiles for example. While the speaker, claims that the clouds are thick so, they do not prevent the sunlight to arrive for the planet.

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Average: 0.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it is impossible for a human to live on Mars and the lecture has an opinion that...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ger 90 times that Earth pressure, which if a spacecraft go there it will destroy i...
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Line 4, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...ill destroy immediately when it landed. whereas the professor said that is lower than t...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...way of the station by 15 Kilometers. on the second place, the author told us th...
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Line 8, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the sunlight to arrive for the planet.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, whereas, while, for example, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1373.03311258 72% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53917050691 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37509213896 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 21.2450331126 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.735097167 49.2860985944 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.166666667 110.228320801 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 21.698381199 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.3333333333 7.06452816374 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082785074109 0.272083759551 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351159603411 0.0996497079465 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194883494897 0.0662205650399 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040882324036 0.162205337803 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00977304777164 0.0443174109184 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.3589403974 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 53.8541721854 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.0289183223 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.498013245 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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