Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Before tendering my opinion I guess it’s crucial to take quick glance on this argument on both sides. Some people believe that there is no enough time to spend on doing several things. But, others agree that doing just few things in the right way will be better. In my perspective, I concur with the second group of people because of several reasons why I subscribe that attitude elaborating cogently in the subsequent paragraphs.
First reason come to mind consolidating my stand point is nowadays life getting so busy, and become tougher than in the past few decades. So the most essential issue is the time for many people all around the world. Moreover, people can used their time in such properly way. People in this era have to arrange their time to do the most important thing first priority in their life For instance, I’m studying for my TOEFL exam and working on my grammar and vocabulary to get improved. Also, I’m trying to spend few hours a day with my toddler daughter.
Second reason I need to give it some attention is that with the unlimited access to different kind of technology these days lead people to think negatively. Furthermore, focusing on few things will prevent humans mind distracted. Plethora of people consider giving an attention to few things will impact their life in positively way. Instead of distract them self with a lot of things, they can do solely few things perfectly. Many studies on people brains claimed that people can easily becoming distracted if they focusing on more than three issues in their lives.
Additionally, if people do many issue that will affect their intellectual capacity. For example, reading, focusing, thinking, and ability to understand. So, giving an attention on few things will raise people fundamental knowledge and critical thinking. That will improve their life and build a good future. Actually, improving our self-will lead to life full of thrives and prosperity.
To but in brief, I strongly agree that people have to do few things rather that do many things without any purpose. In contrast, to do multiple things wrongly because there is no sufficient time to spend on different things and that will affect the quality and valuable of these many things. In nutshell, in fact there are multiple other factors supplement the aforementioned statement, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1149, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... of people consider giving an attention to few things will impact their life in po...
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Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun issue seems to be countable; consider using: 'many issues'.
Suggestion: many issues
...ir lives. Additionally, if people do many issue that will affect their intellectual cap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i guess, in brief, in contrast, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2899.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 7.10539215686 4.8611393121 146% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 42.8523803659 2.67179642975 1604% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53431372549 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 196.311130396 48.9658058833 401% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.772727273 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0591143980776 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943211610826 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846863315944 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152138202786 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936286229464 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 11.7677419355 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.96 10.9000537634 220% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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