• Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in group led by a tour guide.
Traveling is one of the most enjoyable activities that one can do to be relieved from the pressure of modern lifestyle, and distract their minds from daily problems. A question which can be raised in this regard is that in what conditions people can have more pleaser during traveling. Some people state that it is better to travel with a group and a leader, while others prefer to travel alone. I subscribe to the former opinion, and in the ensuing paragraphs, I will provide two reasons to illustrate my point of view.
To begin with, traveling with a group provide an environment that everyone can improve their social skills, which is very important in today’s modern life. There are different kinds of people with diverse opinions and beliefs in a group, so one can be familiar with several types of personality, and recognize how she or he can deal with other people. Moreover, they can find new friends which they are more comfortable with. From my own experience, when I was a student in high school, some of my friends and I went to a camp with a large group. We had a lot of fun during the trip, and we met some students in other schools. Besides, we participated in group discussions and found out that how it can be challenging to deal with others’ opinion, and I understood the fact that how I can deal with other people with no conflict. Hence, it is clear that when people go on a trip with a group, they have more opportunity to find some new friends and widen their relationships; therefore, they can build their social skills.
The second reason is that people can manage their time better when they go with a tour guide. Nowadays, life is being complicated, and people are busy, so they have less free time to invest in their travels; thus, they try to maximize their use of time. When people go to another city or even another country, they are not familiar with the most interesting or more beautiful places there. So, they have to consume a lot of time and energy to find out the better places to visit, but with leading a tour guide, they can manage their time and have more fun. For instance, three years ago, I went to Kashan, a city in the center of Iran, on my own for two days. Although it was a good trip and I had a great time in there, I realized that there were more places which be worthy of visiting, but I could not make it, because of the bad management. On the contrary, one of my friends told me that she had seen most of the historical places in Kashan in two days because she had gone with a tour guide.
In conclusion, considering both reasons mentioned above, I believe that traveling in a group with a tour guide, has some advantages that outweigh traveling alone. First, one can improve their social ability and find new friends; also, they can maximize their use of time by letting an experienced person guide them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2354.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50957854406 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49922699107 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446360153257 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 738.9 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9597154889 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.7 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158881948361 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628549656647 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628631203544 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114174760161 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223552608826 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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