Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, most people have busy lives due to their hard duties in society, and they need to have peaceful moments for relaxation. Someone prefers to spend time alone to relieve their stress. While, I personally, prefer to be in groups of my friends and my family to reduce my anxieties. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, spending time with our close friends can change our mood and make us happy. We can relieve our bad feelings and stress by talking to someone who understands us deeply.
talking and spending time with our dears gives me an opportunity to forget what offends me. For instance, when I am not in good mood I can forget my stress when we cook pizza and tell jokes with my lovely sisters. They have a cheerful personality and when we are together we are the happiest girls.
Besides, we can speak with those who have knowledge and experience about my problems. Even, we can talk about our private issues without any embarrassment and ask them for help and guidance. For example, I usually have very busy weekdays because of my career responsibility. ِActually, this work pressure suffers me and put me under stress. Thus, I have to tolerate that. Therefore, I talk to my close friends and family on weekends and get their help. Companionship with them gives me a great sense of belonging and empathy. using their advice makes me really relax and refresh for next weeks.
To conclude, the best way to relax isn't to be alone for me, in contrast, in my opinion, if I spend my free time with my family and friends, I can talk to them and have an enjoyable time. Also, their advice helps me to solve my problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60066006601 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50361739835 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2381202754 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3684210526 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9473684211 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140444208235 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481648249749 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553507826939 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934138977444 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03146588407 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.