Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being in stressful mode all day has become one of the significant characteristics of the lifestyle these days. Many ways and methods have been used to relieve stress; one of them is spending quality time alone. Many people assert that spending time can be very helpful in relaxing. On the other hand, others believe that being alone may exacerbate the problem. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose to spend time alone. I think being alone will enhance the relaxation process for several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, spending time with yourself alone will allow the person to think clearly without any interruption. Being alone usually lets you organize your priorities and understand yourself better without being interrupted by anyone. I admit that my experience has profoundly influenced my opinion on this matter. In my last year at university, I faced many problems with my graduation project. I had worked on a challenging task with zero reasonable results from experiments. I spent many stressful days without sleeping or eating well. Finally, I decided to spend time alone, which was my best decision. I organized my work and replanned the project. Consequently, my thesis finished very well, and I got a high grade.
Secondly, being alone will make you clear your mind and be true to yourself. I always believe that no one can understand better than you. No one can help you to relax if you cannot settle by yourself. I was drawing from my own experience. Last year, I had a lot of tasks had been to do. I was so stressed and anxious that my mother tried to help with my hectic days, but she just failed. Lastly, I tried to spend some time alone to relieve my stress and clear my mind, which was a practical step.
In light of the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that being alone for a short time will asset individuals to think clearly and relieve stress.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79881656805 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63684998377 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55325443787 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6807602992 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5217391304 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6956521739 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215160292631 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633752813958 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463138366202 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137892026957 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016433835386 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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