Nowadays, we live in this hectic world, where people should face with all the anxieties and problems that exist. While some people believe that to stay relax and reduce stress we should be alone, others do not agree this notion and think that being alone will not help. I personally am of the latter opinion and I will elaborate on why I feel this way in the following paragraphs.
First of all, if we stay alone when we feel anxious and stressed, this will lead to more problems like we can get depressed. Hence, this is not a great option to follow, since it will not only reduce stress, but also add more pressure to the person and leads to more serious problems. In this way, the person will get into trouble and should deal with the mental issues that comes with it. For example, my cousin chose to stay home and live in solitude when he faced with his problems, and now he is depressed and he is not mentally in a stable situation and he uses some medication to improve his depression. So, while staying alone may help for short time but it is not a good way to stay away from stress.
Second of all, when we encounter with hard situations we can go out and spend time with our family or friends and enjoy our moments without thinking about the problem we had. In this way, we can reduce stress and be relax and forget about stressful thoughts. In addition, we can go to the cinema and watch movies with friends and spend time together, or we can do different things to stay away from stress. My own story is a compelling example of this. When I was in university, I had difficult times studying and writing my thesis and to avoid all the burdens and stresses I had, I always chose to hang out with friends and even travel and stay away for a couple of days to restore my energy and get back on track.
To put it all in a nutshell, I believe that to relax and eliminate stresses we should not only avoid being alone since it will lead to other mental and complicated issues, but also we should hang out with friends and do different things to forget the problem and come back with more energy to continue our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, so, while, for example, i feel, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32330827068 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19995597288 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461152882206 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0139927705 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.214285714 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190042718626 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809937759951 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433751563847 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128320680149 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194137012014 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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