Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Undoubtedly, relaxation and being calm plays a pivotal role in every individual's lives. A large number of people wonder when we can have less stress and more relax time. In this regard, some individuals are proponents of the notion that the best way to completely relax is spending time alone, while others believe otherwise. I personally concur with this idea. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate upon my two reasons.
First, people do not have to spend money for it. To be more specific, most of activities which people do them with others need money and they have to pay a certain amount of money for it. In this modern era which is complicated, it is essential for everyone who have job and earn money. thus, this kind of lifestyle put a lot of stress to people for gaining more money. In this regard, people need some activities which are easy and accessible and free for being relax. To get this goal, people can relax and reduce their stress alone. To put it in a more vivid picture, take, for instance, a 30-year-old man who is going to work every day till noon. If he wants to go to restaurants, gym, museum, or cinema, he needs to spend vast amount of money for his partner and himself. Therefore, he can stay in home and listen to music, read books, or do yuga by his own.
The second reason why we should relax alone is that we can do it as soon as we want and save our time. To put it in other word, when people want to have time with others, they should spend a vast amount of time to schedule the plans for going out or having a meeting with others. thus, people waste their time in finding a consensus in one topic. I guess at this point, I can make my explanation thoroughly comprehended by sharing what I myself have already experienced. when I was in dormitory, I had 5 friends with different temperament. I remember that every time that we want go out, we spent a lot of time for finding best place, so I used to go out by my own when I was stressed and choose the best place and best time for relaxation. some people claim that individuals feel loneliness in stressful time. Even though it is true assessment, the benefits of being alone for relaxation outweigh the cost of it.
To recapitulate, the reasons and explanation above lead us to the conclusion that being alone is better for relaxing, inasmuch as people not only can save their money but also they can save their time. The author suggests that people should find their favorite activities for doing in private time without any bothering and distracting extraneous factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
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... will elaborate upon my two reasons. First, people do not have to spend money...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the activities') or simply say ''most activities''.
Suggestion: most of the activities; most activities
...pend money for it. To be more specific, most of activities which people do them with others need m...
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Suggestion: jobbed
..., it is essential for everyone who have job and earn money. thus, this kind of life...
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...r everyone who have job and earn money. thus, this kind of lifestyle put a lot of st...
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..., read books, or do yuga by his own. The second reason why we should relax al...
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...want go out, we spent a lot of time for finding best place, so I used to go out by my own wh...
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... relaxation outweigh the cost of it. To recapitulate, the reasons and explana...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i guess, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56008583691 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52221886101 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487124463519 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.400618583 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5416666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187667213193 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591985729254 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414675793813 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126812699323 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527660889408 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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