Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I disagree with the proposed statement. Personally saying, I think being with friends, family, or anyone who makes us calm is the best way to relax and reduce stress, not spending time alone. Some people might say that I can be relaxed when I am alone or do meditations or other practices to relaxing, but I am not like them.
I mostly prefer to do my works when I am alone. In contrast, when I want to be relaxed and do not think about my works, or other things; I will go to the park, cinema, or elsewhere with my friends or my family. Being with nice people makes me happy, and for a while makes me free of anything that bothers me.
For example, I am a graduate student at university. I live in a city where my university is there, far from my family. It was very difficult for me to live a long distance from my home. My works like working in a laboratory, researching, doing experiments, doing term papers, and thinking about these works made me nervous and full of stress. When I was doing those works, I must be alone to be concentrated and doing well. So, after that, I did not want to be alone anymore. I wanted to be with my friends and having fun to do not think about anything that made me nervous.
In another hand, even if there is no one to spending time with, I will prefer to go outside to see people, watching kids who are playing.
To sum up, I think people need each other as I need. Being alone is not the only way to get relaxed. Sometimes we need to speak with a person about what makes us happy and relieved.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, in contrast, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19594594595 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39760159865 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516891891892 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6935599485 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0588235294 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172812958877 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646024670038 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064543115222 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110832537513 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787814389365 0.0645574589148 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 10.9000537634 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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