Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.

i am completely agree with this statement that have said successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know to do well because i think sometimes we need to have some risks about our goal. i have a lot of exprements that i have to get some risk. generally we can not get some thing easily we must have working hard and trying new things that might be dangerous. scientist and well known people in science always were in hard and difficult conditions. some times they lost important and valuable things for their purpose. we can do what we know how to do well but some times that is not sufficient even about little purpose so that will not to be enough for bigger purpose. i believe some exprements will be good and useful and effective for what will do in future and in other our decision. some exprement will learn us impressive things, beautiful things and those can take us over our imagination or mind our belief. also they can do nothing in our life but in this way we will not get precious goal in our life. if we do a big work in our life as a consequence we will enjoy from our life and we will be satissfied from our decision and works. also our name will be deathless and people in the future will remember us.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 237.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29957805907 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29150831196 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510548523207 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5628168082 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288688531086 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119100203663 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143168970133 0.0737576698707 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288688531086 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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