Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
A glance at people’s attitudes toward the stress brings to the light a question that has been asked several times, namely, whether it is better to spend time alone to relax or not. It goes without saying that people’s preference is not unanimous, so although some people prefer to hang out with their close friends to feel relaxed, others like to stay alone and focus on their hobbies. As a new mother, I definitely would rather stay in a calm and tranquil place alone without anybody else.
The foremost reason why I am supporting this idea lies in the fact that I am normally surrounded by a lot of people, and it makes me tired to listen and talk to different people at the same time. Since my brain is occupied with a lot of sounds and noises, it is a better choice to let it rest and retrieve its energy in silence. Recent studies conducted at Georgia State University show that people who do not have any private time are more likely to experience severe depression and anxiety due to an overload of their brain. If the mind is always exposed to stress, noise, and light, it does not have time to rest and recover its functionality; therefore, the depression comes after. In other words, if a person wants to stay healthy mentally, he needs to spend sometimes a day alone.
Another subtle point that I should deem is the fact that in the group of friends and families you will have more conflict about a group’s activities which attract all members. To be more specific, even you and your close friend do not have completely the same objectives and mindsets, which causes disagreements and arguments. For example, when I need to have some rest, I watch comedy movies when the light is on, while my husband prefers to watch dramas in a dark room. This problem prevents us from watching movies together, specifically when we are under a lot of pressure. In fact, being in a group makes people more tired and exhausted, and it is a waste of energy rather than retrieve energy.
Due to the aforementioned argument explored in the previous statements, I highly recommend people to have some private time during days to experience a better life without stress and conflict.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 758, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'spend'.
Suggestion: sometimes spend
...s to stay healthy mentally, he needs to spend sometimes a day alone. Another subtle point that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65544041451 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56366883913 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572538860104 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.3607912848 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.357142857 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130522073309 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431430742868 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389200736806 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786788914542 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361926906309 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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