Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the busy and crowded world, we should not expect people to be polite to each other.
Nowadays, we live in a busy and crowded world, so people may ignore manners. Furthermore, some may think impoliteness is acceptable; however, according to following reasons and some of my personal experiences, I still believe that we can expect people to be polite to each other.
First, people want to success, and polite people can impress others. Take me, a founder of a start-up company, for example. I meet all kinds of people every day and most of them are my clients. Furthermore, to promote my products successfully, I have to act politely. To be more specific, before I visit my clients, I...
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being polite make people like to give hands.
being polite makes people like to give hands.
flaws:
More sentences varieties wanted. Try to use less pronouns or not to use pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
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Score: 25 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 363 350
No. of Characters: 1685 1500
No. of Different Words: 206 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.365 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.642 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.639 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.278 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.792 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.193 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5