Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the busy and crowded world today, we should not expect people to be polite to each other.
Even the world is perhaps busier and more crowded than ever before, I still believe we should expect people to be polite to each other. Being polite is the first step of good behaviors, which is taught to kids in almost every family and primary school. Such behavior is beneficial thus expectable, whether the world is busy or not.
Being polite is a moral quality, often educated, which cannot be violated by the crowdedness of the world. I remember when I was a kid, the first thing I learned about interpersonal relationship is being polite. Without such behavior, I may have been hated by every family member and grew up lonely. In kinergarden, politness is always a quality favored by everyone. The most popular kids in school are usually very polite and well behaved, no matter how busy he is. Since the education has profound effect on people, I don't believe people can easily be rude to each other just because we are in a cusy and crowed world.
People are benefited from politeness, so such behavior is expectable. People don't get away from something that brings them benefits. Politness can leave a fresh and delightful first expression to strangers and thereby gives multiple chances to polite people. For example, when taking an audition, being polite can make the conversation easier and increase the probability of getting the job. When leaving a store, holding the door for the people behind and a simple "thank you" can bring smiles to each other's faces. Such benefits, big or small, makes our life brighter, adding a sense of joy to our busy and crowded life. Therefore, it is highly expectable that people be polite to each other.
Athough the current generations may be accidently impolite to someone due to unawareness, people can make up for it when the time is right. In this time and age, when every one is loaded with stress of life, it is hard to expect people could be polite to every single one passed in their lives. Sometimes we are just consentrated too much on our work and not aware of other's existence. For example, we may checking e-mails while passing by an aquantence without saying hi. However, when we realize such situation, we can make up for it by apologizing.
In conclusion, we have every right and reason to expect perple to be polite to each other, regardless in what kind of world we are. However busy or crowded the would may be, it is still a common sense among people to be polite.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 15.1003584229 232% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76580796253 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55432343793 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538641686183 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8341021065 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4782608696 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5652173913 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367330843242 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109161019201 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943774131094 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240556134189 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683207698135 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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