Two diverse perspectives were found when meticulously evaluating above issue. One perspective is affirmative with the sentence that childhood is happiest time of a person's life other answers shows disapproval. Personally i have proclivity towards affirmative side.
A golden period of life.., Is this what they call for childhood..? It is best time of life because of many reasons. The reasons are described bellow. First reason is that in childhood we do not have to worry about everything or we can say nothing. There is no tension and no reasons of being worried. Responsibilities increase with age because after growing up we are supposed to give a beautiful childhood to another baby. Adult age is like payback time whatever hurdles were faced by our parents, we are going to do same for our kids. In childhood we spend all our time playing and spending time with parents. After growing up we spend our most of time earning money.
When we are kids every wish is fulfilled by our parents, everybody loves us because of no reasons, every activity is praised by everyone. Whereas, adults have to fulfill other's wishes without thinking of their own and many time instead of appraisal they get demotion and they have to deal with it. One study suggested that playing with kids gives relief from tension and it is happiest time for both. This is like magic.
Most important thing is that in childhood we have very less study as well as our every mistake is easily excused after little scolding. Every child has routine like waking up, eating,sleeping, little study, playing and again playing. Some religion consider kids as gods gift because they do not have anger, compitation, jealousy issues. They are supposed to be pure by mind. Who will deny such wonderful life ? everyone loves their childhood time because of all these reasons while had very rough childhood like they faced poverty sometimes childhood of an orphan might be rough but most of people have lovely memories. That's why I strongly agree that childhood is magical time period of person's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the happiest'.
Suggestion: is the happiest
...mative with the sentence that childhood is happiest time of a persons life other answers sh...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ce that childhood is happiest time of a persons life other answers shows disapproval. P...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...mative side. A golden period of life.., Is this what they call for childhood.....
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
....., Is this what they call for childhood..? It is best time of life because of man...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...this what they call for childhood..? It is best time of life because of many reasons. T...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...playing and spending time with parents. After growing up we spend our most of time ea...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the happiest'.
Suggestion: is the happiest
...h kids gives relief from tension and it is happiest time for both. This is like magic. ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sleeping
...child has routine like waking up, eating,sleeping, little study, playing and again playin...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everyone
...nd. Who will deny such wonderful life ? everyone loves their childhood time because of a...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ildhood of an orphan might be rough but most of people have lovely memories. Thats why I stron...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ut most of people have lovely memories. Thats why I strongly agree that childhood is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94540229885 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59837205644 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560344827586 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3199922917 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8260869565 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1304347826 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26086956522 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247140413389 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750734251723 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806979288462 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158483664691 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411691595137 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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