Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to follow strict rules set by their parents. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Children are like clay, we can give whatever shape we want to them. There is a saying that morning shows the day. How we shape children now, determines their future. But in attempt to make their future bright, making them follow strict rules is not justified. I disagree with the statement that children should be kept under strict rules set by parents.
To begin with, childhood is probably the most creative stage of life and rules seriously undermine their creativity. A famous poet had once said, children are the father of a man. Even adults can learn from them. As they encompass enormous amount of imagination, if we restrict them with set rules and regulations, they become narrow in their thinking and this is not good for their progress. While during my childhood days, I loved painting but my parents forced me to spend time in study which made me quit my hobby to paint. Rules restrict children’s capabilities.
Furthermore, binding the children in rules make them anxious and irritated towards parents and society. This instead of making them disciplined, makes them violent and aggressive. We can see the example of Hitler, who as a kid was forced to follow several restrictions. This led to increasing of hatred in him and finally led to the violent world war second. Sometime, the rules which were devised to make children disciplined may backfire turning them into vicious demon.
On the contrary, if children are not bound by rules, they might strand away from the usual course. As they lack the capacity to distinguish good and bad, they must be made to follow rules so that they stay in the path. Children are vulnerable, yet it’s better to give them moral lessons for teaching them good values rather than keeping them under strict rules and regulations. For my smaller sister, we always opted for teaching her good values instead of restricting her. That way she could decide on her own what is good and what is bad for her. And she always stood up to our expectations, never diverting from her path.
Should children be compelled to follow the rules and regulations? I don’t think so, as the rules hampers their imagination and might negatively affect their temperament. Rather than making them follow rules they should be given lessons to make them a responsible person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, as for, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59935335405 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3910220843 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.28 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.68 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233342765483 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772844281312 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964228969713 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157773933389 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877292118937 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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