Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so.
Parents raise their children in the hope that during old age, their kids will look-after them. Even, when a child grows up and starts entering work-market, many parents expect to be helped in day-to-day family expenses. It is agreed that adolescents should assist in homely finances and this essay will elaborate on this using examples and arguments.
To begin with, almost all nations have struggling parents and are in the middle-class zone. Teenagers from these families have to be more responsible as their parents work hard to feed the family, hence, are expected to cover for part of home duties; majorly finances. For instance, as per the UN report on families structuring, an average middle-class family of four in the US pays about $2000 is monthly rent. This is to say, parents, with adult children, pay for their education, hockey games for not less than $50,000 and perhaps could have used all their savings to fulfil the dreams of their children.
Surprisingly, teens who choose to move out and run away from their own family are empirically not seen to do well in life either. Thereby, teens once they are able to i.e. after their under-graduation or after they step into the work-market, after legal age which is usually 18 or 19, should start taking care of their family expenses, for example, paying $500 a month for rent or getting groceries done for the family to save parent's time. This not only assists parents but also engrave positive habits of being more responsible and loving family at that age when needed the most. Conclusively, when adolescents understand their family duties they get prepared to deal with life and their own finances well as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... arguments. To begin with, almost all nations have struggling parents and are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92253521127 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57146419179 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1703269275 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112343992271 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450622663589 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225037193217 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781796168068 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00979739316869 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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