Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual.
Every individual is a part of the whole population
There have lots of simple and easy ways for individual to protect the environment
As the human activity severely increases, the environmental issues become more and more serious not only to the countries and their governments but also to the reliable community which we are living in. The environmental issue now can be a single challenge above all towards human. Lots of people and organizations work mindlessly in day and night to solve this complex problem; therefore, a lot of people emphasize that the environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual. However, in my opinion, I think that everyone has the responsibility and ability to solve this problem no matter how serious and complicated it is.
Everyone is an indispensable part of the community, so the pollution could not just come from an individual person or a single group; it is the result which is caused by the whole human spice. It is ridiculous that the one who caused the problem says “ I cannot deal with this problem because it is too complex”. This big community is constricted by human, so every change in this community is hardly to get rid of everyone’s efforts, which is totally same to the environmental issues. The bad scenes of the natural environment are not only because people who spit on the road, who cut down the forest, who overly mine the oil from the underground, or who always throw the plastic garbage every where; but it is because all these things happened together, which in order to finally cause the ultimate condition that we are seeing now. However, if every individual take care of their behavior that they do to the environment, it will not be as serious as now.
On the other hand, for solving the problem which some people say “environmental issues are too complex to be handled by the individual”, there has various thing they can easily do to protect the environment. People always say that the ways to solve the problem are more than the problems itself. The whole world or community is undoubtedly abnormous to an individual, but if they only put the view on themselves and their life, the problem to them will just be a piece of cake; in instant, in the neighborhood which I used to live in, the market always uses the paper bag instead of the plastic bag; Also, A bunch of people who always consume in this market will bring their own bag. In this way, people can easily protect the environment of this neighborhood.
No matter who take care about the environmental problem, government or big organization, the basically important unit which will carry out and operate the laws or activities are the rural people. Government or the popular corporation is the just the leader of the mind, people are the real force to operate it and the core of success. Governments or organizations are all composed by people same as us, but people in a small quantity will not make a big change to the whole world, just as I said before no one change is cause by an individual or a single group. For example, In my father land China, for government to protect the envionment, they set the law which limit the driving of private cars by control the license plate number with date. Because people strictly following the law, our environment after those days became much more better than usual.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vidual is a part of the whole population There have lots of simple and easy ways ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or individual to protect the environment As the human activity severely increases...
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Line 6, column 690, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...or who always throw the plastic garbage every where; but it is because all these things hap...
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Line 10, column 835, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...nvironment after those days became much more better than usual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2797.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 587.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76490630324 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76676303065 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451448040886 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 899.1 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.6886934256 48.9658058833 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.388888889 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6111111111 20.6045352989 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182954927547 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690290713752 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874934854976 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981479807848 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523601878613 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 10.002688172 205% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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