Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Even if science and technology would continue to advance and improve the quality of people' lives, the most significant improvements have already taken place.
For people like you and me in this information era, it is hard to imagine how our ancestors survived. Poverty, hunger, lack of education, thanks to science and technology, we are tackling these problems one by one. Even though so many achievements have been made through the years, it is not yet to say that the most significant improvements have already taken place. We humans have a glorious history before and an even greater future in the future. I firmly believe that science and technology would make even more significant improvements in the future. Nothing is impossible.
Computer science is one of today’s most promising areas. In the age of information explosion, there are so many achievements yet to be made. Human-computer interaction is one of them. Scientists are working hard in human-computer interaction, and perhaps in the near future, it can be implemented in our daily life. Here is an example. Imagine you are driving a car passing through a café, and you want to buy a cup of latte. All you need to do is make a few taps on the car’s touch screen, and you got the latte. Human-computer interaction can also be applied in medicine, especially for those who suffered from spinal cord injury or lose part of their limbs. By connecting your brain with the device, the device can read your nerve signals do what your brain wanted. It is a blessing for some disabled people.
Gene engineering is another promising area that focuses on the most cutting-edge technologies. Agricultural technology (hybrid crops, genetically-modified food) once helped us fight poverty, and now it is bringing humans to another era- Gene Era. By using gene engineering, scientists can kick off the bad genes in a plant and foster the good ones, thus increasing yields. In the future, gene engineering may also be used in medicine, if we ruled out some ethical reasons. It is possible that a couple may choose to select their good genes, kick off the bad ones, and have a perfect baby of their own.
The earth is not our destination. Exploring outer space provides us with more opportunities for our future generations. Fifty years ago, man made the first landing on the moon- a giant leap for mankind. Nowadays, we have explored the solar system, such as Mars, Mercury, Pluto, and sending rockets in the solar system. In the near future, we will keep exploring the space. Maybe one day, we will find some other outer space creature or our future habitat. The future reserves to be unknown.
To conclude, science and technology will continue to improve our lives profoundly in the future. Some of the future improvements may take place in computer science, medicine, agriculture, or space exploration. The greatest improvement is yet to be made.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 98, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2293.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9311827957 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91493933292 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.025569813 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9677419355 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25806451613 5.45110844103 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21327317467 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492167692035 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766477932509 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131969942484 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11487424556 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.