Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Being creative rather than planning carefully will come up with the best solution to a problem.
IIn one's life, there are countless problems to face. Some people have always been in pursuit of proper strategies to solve these problems. And their opinions are divided. Some people deem creativity as the only source of solutions to a problem. While others prefer to plan carefully before taking any action. As far as I'm concerned, planning carefully is a more effective problem-solving skill than being creative. Here are my reasons and examples.
To begin with, thoughtful planning can help us find the real cause of a problem. A problem with a complicated cause is not always what it looks like. If we fail to get a grip on this cause, we stand no chance to tackle it successfully. No matter how creative we are. Detailed planning is likely to lead us to the cause. For a doctor when facing a patient with a symptom of flu. He will not simply prescribe some cold medicines but have the patient undergo a series of checkups such as forecast or even X-Ray. The checkups are somewhat a careful plan before making the right decision.
In addition, productivity and efficiency will be greatly improved by carefully planning. Every time at the end of the semester, I am always busy as a beaver because I have to prepare for final exams, writing papers on different subjects. And work on some research reports. Without planning I will easily get lost in such a busy schedule. Thus I have a to-do list according to priorities of tasks and mark the finished items as I move forward. In this way, I can manage my time well and solve multiple multiple problems at the same time.
Admittedly, I am not denying the value of coming up with creative ideas to solve a problem. For instance, as an old saying goes. Man proposes God disposes. Under some circumstances, things do not go as well and things do not go as we expected. A creative person can always have a quick response to an emergency. However, it is okay for being creative to be the last resort in extreme cases. But it should never displace planning carefully as the main approach towards problems.
In the end, I would like to sum up this composition by quoting an ancient Chinese proverb "Preparedness ensures success and unpreparedness spells failure." The proverb means a good plan always leads to the successful settlement of a problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, thus, well, while, as for, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6368159204 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67693131002 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 402.0 20.1344086022 1997% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1864.0 100.406767564 1856% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 402.0 20.6045352989 1951% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 122.0 5.45110844103 2238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287602735131 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.287602735131 0.076458572812 376% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146751752476 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620666891069 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 201.4 11.7677419355 1711% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -328.09 58.1214874552 -564% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 158.9 10.1575268817 1564% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.11 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.15 8.01818996416 339% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 10.002688172 560% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 162.8 10.0537634409 1619% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 159.0 10.247311828 1552% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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