All work and no play makes jack a dull boy quote applies equally to both adults and kids. Entertainment activities are essential to make one's life enjoyable ,stress free and filled with positive energy. These are not only applicable for children even adults have their own ways of gaming. The following enumerates the reasons for the significance of recreational activities.
Firstly, games are a good source of relaxation from ones hectic and busy work life. For instance, football,tennis makes one engage in the play rather than their work projects which involves lot of mental thinking. During such games people do forget the rest of things going around the world and focus only on the ball. Consequently they are less stressful while playing games and feel more energetic which keeps the balance in the body. Thus,outdoor games keeps a person away from the tensions and difficulties of real life.
Secondly, through games there more chances of social interaction. Likewise, the people in a group easily make connections to form good friends. Eventually, they share their common interests and these group will help make life more interesting and improve ones quality of life. This definitely will improve the work also because its refreshing and joyful for the adults to meet up with friends.
Thirdly, games provides an excellent source of exercise. As a the people age diseases occur due to the sedentary lifestyle, for example, obesity, diabetes. Outdoor games can help people to ensure mobility as such they are active. Exercise is also a good source of physical and mental wellness. Likewise, it can make people feel young and energetic too.
To conclude, job and games are the two sides of a coin essential for a man to live in this fast moving cut-throat world of competition. This kind of recreation will help in relaxation, interaction among peers and a sense of well being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0608974359 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68340829216 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9872361893 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.95 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183230936404 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539348978399 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485647022013 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099921016179 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386876767228 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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