As we progress into the 21st century, educational opportunities are expanding. Some students have found great success in studying online at their own pace. Other students prefer a more traditional education in a typical school building. Which manner of studying do you think is better? Use specific examples and reasons to support your opinion.
In this present generation there are plethora of options to learn because of the advent of technology. Earlier classroom education was mandatory while in this era online education is more prevalent and I do think that online education is better than traditional classroom learning. The economic means of obtaining education, convenience and less difficult application process are the key reasons for its success.
To begin with, the application process for online courses are easy which makes it more popular amongst the people. There are online sites that provide online education and training services to students . Most of the sources are taught by eminent and respected staffs who have tremendous experience in their field of education. For example, the coursera is a well known site which provides numerous courses to learn. This is used by students, adults and even the working community. Today the world is competitive in all area of dimension thus people need to be trained for their development. Hence, such sites enable people to become updated to face the future world requirements.
Additionally, the online courses are cheap when compared to university courses. This makes it even more attractive due to the prospect of learning advanced subjects at a less fee. Likewise, it helps the economically backward community to learn expensive university courses. To illustrate, there are online transcription courses available are cheaper than university course. Moreover, online sources provide a lot of information in such manner that people can utilise it to their maximum. In certain cases they do arrange internships in companies which would pave way employment opportunities to many young graduates.
Furthermore, online curses do not follow strict time table.THis helps students and adults to learn in their leisure time. They can work or do part time jobs and earn while learning .This is so much beneficial to people since their time is not wasted. On the other hand, traditional classrooms need uniforms attendance during which students cannot work .Thus online education was way more convenient in the time saving aspect.
To conclude i think that online learning is better in this fast pacing world. As the world is growing at a faster rate we need people trained in novel technology for all area. Thus I think online education can bestow a great deal of help in this area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, likewise, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26822916667 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76254983035 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3660036891 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.9545454545 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216555836833 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606038686487 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604164999971 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122829224396 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202821686507 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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