Many colleges give students the flexibility to choose to live in dorms on campus or in apartments in nearby communities . Would you prefer to live on campus or off campus and why?use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays the university dorms are very expensive and as the years progress the trend will continue. This would bring a huge burden for students learning ,as such off campus accommodation would become prevalent. I prefer to live in off campus due to following reasons.
To begin with, apartments provide a lot of amenities which campus dorms do not provide. There are places to park vehicle ,own restrooms. One advantage is that students can get single rooms if they are not interested in sharing their rooms. As such studious student do not get disturbed and can get deeply involved in their work. Likewise, we need not adjust to the disturbances and issues caused by others living alongside.
Furthermore, students can have food according to their interest and does not have the distasteful hostel food. For instance, there are chances of infection to spread due to unhealthy cooking pattern in hostel .The entire students get infected with diarrhoea and may become hospitalised. This situation does not occur in off campus because the students can prepare their food according to their taste without any restrictions in cooking.
Yet, the on campus has certain added advantage. Students can prepare in the university hostels during combine study and assignment work. This will help students to finish their work before deadline. Group works cannot be done individually. Likewise, certain discipline and character formation do occur in hostel when adjustments are made for others. Discipline is essential for man to become successful . This will help us to become better employee and manager of life.
To conclude, staying in off campus has many advantages when compared with hostel dorms.Nevertheless, dorms has its own benefits . Everything depend on the financial affordability and the students interest to decide where to stay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3470790378 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84274732631 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6142672897 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.55 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20151359534 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635078262998 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779126188332 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127530520221 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750580033113 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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