Many colleges give students the flexibility to choose to live in dorms on campus or in apartments in nearby communities . Would you prefer to live on campus or off campus and why?use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Generally speaking, I am of the opinion that it is better to live in dorms on campus rather than in apartments nearby. I feel this way for several reasons, some of which will be developed below in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, it is much nearer to the campus which obviously saves a lot of time. Although many argue that living in near campus apartments waste a very few amount of time, however, in a campus students' hectic schedule even a small amount of time will make a substantial difference. Their routine is filled with back to back lectures, long term projects, college events and sometimes even walking few minutes from a nearby apartment will seem cumbersome. I have to admit that my opinion in this matter is profoundly affected by my own personal experience. You see, during my entire college life I shared an apartment with two of my class mates. Even though, my room was just five minutes away from my campus, still some days travelling that distance would become an indomitable task. To be more specific, it was especially hard during my exam time, when every second had to be dedicated to my studies and not on travelling back and to my apartment. additionally, sometimes our lectures used to be postponed and we had to wait for few hours to attend it. On such occassions, my mates living on campus used to go to their room and rest for a while. On the other hand, I didn't had the same luxury since going back to my room and returning again for the lecture was itself a tiring task. This personal experience taught me the advantage of living on campus dorms.
In addition to time saving, on campus housing also keeps the students behavior and moral on check. This is because living in campus dorms does not provide the liberty of roaming and wandering whenever we want, celebrating parties all night long, being indulged in immoral acts and many mores. It will not be an exaggeration to say that on campus housing keeps the students behavior on check as they have to live within some boundaries under the supervision of an official authority. Let's make this more clear from my above experience of living in apartment. Since, none of our parents were there to control us, we used to have parties all night long and also involved in some immoral acts like drinking and smoking. Of course, not everybody undergoes the same situation. However, I think its safe to say that living independently will obviously bring some demerits along with it. And this in turn also affects their studies.
Finally, living in campus also has its perk of providing a better study environment. I'll be the first to admit that there are lots of student who take their study seriously no matter where they stay. Despite this possibility, living in apartments will surely have many more distractions as compared to dorm rooms. There will be no study schedules, no motivation to study, no professor consultation, no supervision of our seniors and the freedom to do whatever we want.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I believe the merits of living in campus dorms outweighs that of living in an apartment for the above mentioned reasons. Studying is the foremost aim of any college students and in addition to wastage of time, there will also be a lot of distractions and a comparatively less feasible study ambiance in apartments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, second, so, still, while, i feel, i think, in addition, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 95.0 52.1666666667 182% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2792.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 584.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64848055307 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486301369863 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 892.8 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4972217502 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.407407407 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6296296296 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262188265255 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806936235698 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743846386559 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16060894226 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246440542921 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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