Which would you prefer a job that pays a lot of money but that you don’t really enjoy or a job that you really love that doesn’t pay well. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your opinion.
It is not always possible to obtain a job that interest us. Some people consider job as a passion while others recognise it as a means of living. However, I think that an occupation must be considered as our second family and be treated in such a manner even if the salary is less.
To begin with, people do not experience boredom with their job that they perform with love. Happiness can be defined in getting big things being done or man can even find pleasure in small things. When the work done is achieved to its perfection even in small amounts man can find a mental happiness. On the contrary, an uninterested career does not bring a feeling of contentment. Likewise, he has less commitment to his job.This kind of situation doesn’t exist in a job that a person is passionate about.
Additionally, if a person can enjoy and love the work he does, slowly he would become skilled and expert in his area. Moreover, this would make him equipped to design novice ideas which can make company to flourish. This would definitely improve the company’s profit in a manner. To illustrate, a musician who has talent can bring his composition in an excellent way whilst, an uninterested or an unskilled musician would fail in his creation. Thus the talented person with a passion for music will bring his masterpiece while working initially at a low income.
Furthermore, today the job seekers are interested in hiring a person with skills and talent. Companies may not like person with no specific improvement or a person doing monotonous job. Likewise, if we love a job definitely there would be novel contributions soon his name would be celebrated in the area of his interest.The hard work of a person passionate to his job will yield in fruitful results than a person not deeply interested in his job. Soon their companies would analyse this and provide higher wages.
To conclude, it is always better to do a job that interest us.This will help in the overall development of the person both physically and mentally. Good feeling bring good thoughts and vice versa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, i think, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8217270195 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7823910055 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543175487465 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6151806738 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1052631579 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125782329213 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042984188591 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402214575326 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702020672546 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273809802513 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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