Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Government should provide universal health care.
Give reasons and details to support your answer in near about 300 words.
Universal health care provides people all the health services when and where they need without financial hardship. Government should have a plan of universal health care facility in order to provide various health facilities to the people without financial burden. I completely agree with the concept of universal health care plan proposed by the government to cure their people from various types of health hazards without financial problems. I think this way for two reasons which I will examine in this essay.
First of all, universal health care facility allows people to get various health services without financial hardship. Since most of the people are pushed into extreme poverty each year because of the out of pocket spending on health. For instance- Nowadays people can enjoy the full range of health services from health promotion to prevention without spending even a single penny with the assistance of universal health care. However, in the past there was no such facility of universal health package which lead to loss of many people lives because they did not have a large sum of money to treat their illness. It is important that government should have a plan to support universal health care in order to enjoy various health services without suffering from financial overcome. If there are no any such plans, people lose their most of the income to treat various health problems.
Secondly, universal health care allows people to live a healthy life style. Eventually, universal health care aware people regarding balance diet food, physical education and negative impact of obesity which leads to various health hazards. This is exemplified by my personal experience. Before universal health care, people were unaware of their health condition. They used to eat whatever they got as they did not know about the balance food. They did not work out which led to obesity resulting in various health problems like blood pressure, diabetics and heart attack. Consequently, average life span of the people was low. Thus, with the implementation of universal health category promotes healthy life through regular health checkup and curious about health conditions.
In conclusion, to my mind, implementing universal health facility by the government has a positive impact on the people’s health. This is because it allows people with various health facility without financial burden and because it promotes people to live a healthy life style.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-pocket'?
Suggestion: out-of-pocket
...xtreme poverty each year because of the out of pocket spending on health. For instance- Nowad...
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Line 2, column 797, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...g from financial overcome. If there are no any such plans, people lose their most ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27226463104 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52522191537 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458015267176 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6958522059 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.65 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218366151608 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927912542953 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657198314656 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164465513764 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044885370053 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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