College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Which side particularly are we leading the societies by producing manpower who are particularly engaged in jobs that seems most likely be beneficial in current time rather than helping them to pursue what these students want? College students are the boon of society with the diversity in creating different man force according to their passion and interest. In my opinion, I strongly support the theme of pursuing subject that interest them rather than the course that seems to help them getting the jobs in near future killing all their dreams and interest.
Promoting each student to study subjects that satisfies them and lead them mentally calm, tranquil and free from anxiety. If some parent forces their children to follow the trend of market jobs rather knowing their interest or ignoring their interest, somehow leading their children full of depression and anxiety. There is some news where children are found killing themselves because of fear and depression created by their parents by ignoring children’s passion and enforcing them to follow subject leading to market jobs. Therefore, it is the responsibility of parent to guide their children to follow their passion.
College education should encourage their student to pursue their passion which helps them to lead their life of their own helping societies to resolve the problems as well as creating diversity of forces that leads the world through an army of talented and passionate workforce from various background. College education should focus on the importance of each and every aspects of subjects on the development of nation as well as leading the world thorough enormous power of passion coming through different backgrounds and helping the world to solve the unresolved mystery through a combined force of enthusiastic leaders.
However, some argue that following market trend would lead immediate success and lead a better life. They don’t realize what’s going on inside individual mind set who follows market job as they have lack of confidence and consciousness on their current job. They are unable to survive their daily challenges and somehow quit their job and wants to run away from this job. For example: What happens to Sania Gomez if she follows software engineering rather than her passion on music. Similarly, what happens to Sachin Ramesh Tendulkar career if he follows to be an engineer or doctor which are market trending jobs rather than his passion on cricket.
In conclusion, students should follow their passion of dream rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead the jobs. As current market is fluctuating in various aspects, some demanding jobs of today are well unknown in future too which leads enormous competition among students to get that job leading in unemployment in great number.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 490, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...than the course that seems to help them getting the jobs in near future killing all the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23451327434 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55093004742 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486725663717 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9043160043 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.875 118.986275619 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273981884191 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109496461743 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753008370126 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186635159202 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093462532324 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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