Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supportin

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Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Decisions are made relying on the information that we observed either through the experiments or past activities. I totally disagree with the above statement that nostalgia about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today, however these activities really help to make core decisions.

Firstly, the advancement of technologies relies on the experimental data that were considered in the past in order to invent it. For instance, the working principle of mobile phone is similar with the telephone discovered by Graham Bell. However, the addition of new features in the mobile phone is due to necessity of people who desire to possess several devices in the same compact mobile phone. Thus, the new revolution of smart phone primarily depends upon the data or experiment of traditional mobile devices in order to make device even more aesthetic.

Secondly, medical science makes a progressive change in 21st century. The disease which were unable to treat in the past are treated with the invention of new equipment or medicinal devices. The mortality rate was high as people suffered to get treatment either in the simpler disease like fever. With the rapid revolution in medical fields, people are less worried about the disease and focus in earning money so that they can buy health system to treat themselves with the best medicines and medicinal doctors. For instance, Organ transplant was thought one of the rear medicinal treatment in the past however, it is the emerging field to treat disease effectively in case of burn, kidney failure as well as heart failure. All these processes rely on the information carried out in the past in order to make organ transplant successful. Similarly, the world is transferring in biotechnological research in order to cure disease where in the past, it is treated with the medicine developed by pharmaceutical industries. Pharmaceutical plants particularly depend on chemical in order to develop medicines and these medicines are used in order to control these diseases rather than cure them all completely. All new biotechnological treatments depend upon the cause, symptoms and curing elements and strains of viruses that had been in the past or even today in order to make effective treatment.

Thirdly, the consequences of apocalypses of past activities like world wars, civil wars and natural calamities helps to take preventive steps in order to make casualties minimum. For instance, First World war and Second World war had resulted many countries in order to suffer large destruction and suffers. Even the developed countries had to suffer great devastation which resulted in poverty, lack of livelihood and even great damage of economy. The consequences of two nuclear bombs in Hiroshima and Nagasaki even today that Japan is suffering about. Even the children born in these lands will inherent bear disable. The great damage caused by nuclear bomb in 1944 Ad has changed the concept of war and people of today’s world want to get rid of these devastating weapons in order to preserve peace, prosperity and humankind.

However, some may argue that knowing the danger of natural calamities may not prevent of these occurring but with the handful devices, if it is predictable of these unwanted apocalypses, a lot of suffering can be minimized by education and awareness, shifting people from target areas in order to prevent damage of life and property. For instance, People can be forbidden to visit near sea and inside sea at tides by setting alarms and using army forces. The consequences can be minimized by constructing walls around the seashores by preventing floods to move inside cities.

In conclusion, it is handy to consider past experiences and evidences in order to make important decisions by instantaneously or by adding information from today’s experiment in the past data.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 40, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... In conclusion, it is handy to consider past experiences and evidences in order to make importan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 129.0 58.6224719101 220% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3259.0 2235.4752809 146% => OK
No of words: 624.0 442.535393258 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22275641026 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88149002699 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496794871795 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1051.2 704.065955056 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1498566338 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.36 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.96 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179192133539 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523929861581 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554252541502 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107692136798 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721756440227 0.0667264976115 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 169.0 100.480337079 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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