Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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arts and athletics both are dispensable elements of evolved societies. these activities play crucial role in person's live,for this fact, government spend huge sum in support of arts and athletics. However, many people believe that more money should be used in support of arts rather than in support of sports. Actually, I do not concur with this notion for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, with the avent of supports in sports branch, athletics achievements can bring glory to a country. furthermore, the majority of different people in media strata cherish sport in times of hardship to relieve stress. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. my dad works in field of media, even though he interested in sport, especially in athletics. When a country's Olympic team conquer an opponent , my dad really proud of them. Consequently, while people watching the game they feel excitement and satisfaction.
Another equally vital reason that should be highlighted here is that sport enhance health of society in multiple facets. sport include many participants who would be benefited from physical activity, moreover , people can ideolize their champions and these succesful people can motivate to imitate their lyfestyle. For instance, my brother fan of footballer ,and he always try to do things what this footballer do . Therefore, most of time he spend at the gym for building his body like his idol.
And the laast but not least; supporting athletics coast much more. there are necessary components which government should provide athletes such as appropriate field for training, clothes and tools for members. furthermore, as sportsmen spend much time training in field their work should be well-paid, and thus they will not be forced to work on secondary occupation. In addition, there can be injuries of sportsman and it shoul compensate for them too.Moreover, in oreder to compete with others athletes should travel a lot, and tickets, hotel reservations also must be provided.
In light of all aforementioned reasons , it is explicitly obvious that government must spend more money for all branches of sport , especially in our country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23770491803 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85157622803 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1647560486 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.894736842 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94736842105 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229226153893 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07215996231 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837702540632 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1306384146 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864169064129 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.