Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A group will be more helped by a person who is willing to do things what other members want than a person who strongly insists on things in a way that are different from other members want.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A group will be more helped by a person who is willing to do things what other members want than a person who strongly insists on things in a way that are different from other members want.

us" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">The modern society and industry is a complicated system that requires teamwork, communication and cooperation among companies and individuals. almost everyone needs to work in a team. In my opinion, a team member catering to others' preferences is more helpful to a group.

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us" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">First of all, considering other members' thoughts is helpful to the establishment of a positive relationship among the members in a team. there will be less quarrels in a team where the members work together for a shared purpose and work in a similar way. conversely, if someone insists on the things that are different from others want, there must be disagreements on the issue, which will lead to quarrels. Arguments in a team might destroy the harmonious relationship among team members. I believe nobody wants to work in an environment filled with quarrels everyday every day. For instance, I once worked in the student union. there was a teammate who always showed a contrasting views against what most people think of. once when we prepared for a singing contest, he disputed others' opinion at almost every meeting. what is worse is that he didn't want to compromise. everyone felt annoyed, and it turned out to be an unpleasant cooperation experience. hence, in order to establish a harmonious team environment, members who are willing to accept what others think and do things catering to others’ preference are definetely definitely necessary.

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us" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">what's more, efficency will be enhanced if all the members can make compromise. Imagine that a person strongly contends that something should be done in a contradictory way with others. he would try his best to persuade others to agree with him. hence, there must be a long period of stalemate to achieve a consensus. it is a waste of time even if the person's opinion is beneficial to the team, and therefore the efficiency is reduced, needless to say what he insists on is wrong. Take my own experience as an example. I interned in a consulting company last summer vacation. one day we were making a plan of a survey to be finished in shanghai. A co-worker contended that the we shouldn't go to shanghai, since she thought shanghai was too far away from our company. she believed that we should just finish the survey in our city. No one agreed with her, so it took us more than half an hour to discuss on the place where the survey to be done. Although finally we made a consensus, long time had been passed. conversely, it would save us plenty of time if she could make compromise earlier, and efficency efficiency will be promoted as well.

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us" style="font-family:"Arial",sans-serif">In conclusion, it is better to make concession for the sake of group benefits when meeting divergent opinions in cooperation, since it is benefical beneficial for a more positive relationship among teammates and efficiency improvement.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, hence, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2919.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98155737705 4.8611393121 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.98661217492 2.67179642975 299% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 894.6 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 83.2334665203 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39285714286 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 40.0 5.5376344086 722% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168205558032 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643233870733 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783317111831 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687170091056 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101434977059 0.0645574589148 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 10.9000537634 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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