Do you agree or disagree with the following statement If people have the opportunity to get a secure job they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Opportunity they say, comes but once. While some people will argue that it will be better to wait for a comfortable and suitable job than to take the available ones; however, I think people should take any job that is accessible in order keep themselves busy. I feel this way for two reasons which I will analyze in the subsequent paragraphs.

First and foremost, when people have something doing there will be reduction in crime. It is widely known that unemployment is the major source of crimes in our society. Obviously, jobs provide money for people to meet their needs, and when they are satisfied they won't get themselves involve in any societal vices. I had to admit that my opinion on this matter is greatly influenced by my own personal experience. Between the year 2009 and 2015, crime was at its peak in my country, Nigeria. This was as a result of the high rate of unemployment. So many youths have nothing doing to keep themselves from being idle or going hungry. Things became extremely difficult for them because they find it very hard to survive in the country. In order to meet up with their basic needs, they got involved in so many evil acts such as arm robbery, kidnapping, swindling, and other fraudulent activities. However, in 2015 when the new president, Professor John Wick, was elected he was eager to truncate the level of unemployment in the country. He created jobs by building more industries and schools. Hence, unemployment rates reduced drastically because the jobs provided people with the means to meet their needs. Hadn't it not been for the creation of jobs, majority of the unemployed people will still be committing crime.

Secondly, the available job can act as a stepping stone to get the one that is suitable for you. It can provide the skills and training you need to advance your career. Evidently, the more skillful you are the better chance you have to secure a high paying and comfortable jobs. For instance, when I graduated from college in 2015, I wanted to work as an Electrical Engineer in one of the best electric/electronic in the country. After 3 years of searching, I couldn't get a job. One day I was coming back from the market, where I went to get some beverages for my father, I saw an advert of a company looking for graduates to admit for their management trainee position. So, I decided to apply since I have nothing doing. Luckily I got into the company. During the training we will taught how to manage projects, and work as a team for effective production. Additionally, we were taught some management software which was a big plus for me. At the end of my training, I was given a certificate in management because of my performance. Two months after the completion of this program, I applied to Nexus, one of the best electronic company in Nigeria for the position of a full time electrical engineer. As a result of the management I took part in, I was given the job. This example clearly shows how I was able to secure a suitable job because of the skills I gained from my first job.

In conclusion. I feel it is better for people to take jobs that are available for them rather than waiting for jobs that might not come. This is because it will keep them away from crimes, and can act as a foundation to secure a better one.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Hadn't
...ple with the means to meet their needs. Hadnt it not been for the creation of jobs, m...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... country. After 3 years of searching, I couldnt get a job. One day I was coming back fr...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 783, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
...he company. During the training we will taught how to manage projects, and work as a t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1173, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ompany in Nigeria for the position of a full time electrical engineer. As a result of the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng for jobs that might not come. This is because it will keep them away from crim...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2713.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61394557823 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68209464866 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484693877551 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 851.4 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1968655715 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.78125 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286537133736 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068126032881 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672032016219 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195509438544 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324459084403 0.0645574589148 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Hadn't
...ple with the means to meet their needs. Hadnt it not been for the creation of jobs, m...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... country. After 3 years of searching, I couldnt get a job. One day I was coming back fr...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 783, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
...he company. During the training we will taught how to manage projects, and work as a t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1173, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ompany in Nigeria for the position of a full time electrical engineer. As a result of the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng for jobs that might not come. This is because it will keep them away from crim...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2713.0 1977.66487455 137% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61394557823 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68209464866 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484693877551 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 851.4 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1968655715 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.78125 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286537133736 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068126032881 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672032016219 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195509438544 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324459084403 0.0645574589148 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.