Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
improving the quality of universities is one of the challenging problems in every universities. professors have the central role in improving the quality of research and education at the university. There are so many ways to incentivize professors to develop the quality of university. one of them is increasing the salary of professors. I personaly agree with this way and I have two reasons for it, that i mention is later.
First, I believe that increasing the salary have a very positive and stimulating effect on the professors' functionality. In other words, when the salary of professors is increased, they will not confront the financial issues in their personal life. subsequently, these professors do not have to work in a second job position out of university and they dedicate asll their time and energy to university's matters.
Secondly, increasing the salery of professors makes them to attract more students to do high-tech researches. As we know, all professors around the words has involved in so many high-tech projects and researches. In detail, when a professor benefits a high salary, he/she can hire more students to do internships and part-time researches and pay them with his/her own salary. this procedure can help to complete the projects and researches which I mentioned that professors are involved with. subsequently, it can makes these unversities as the most pioneers among the universities around the world.
All in all, increasing the salary of professors has a pleasant influence on the quality of education at the university. Because this causes not only incentivizing the professors and improving their functionality but also hiring more diligent students to do the academic projects and researches and proceed the science and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3475177305 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14614757364 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507092198582 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1684453984 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253592280169 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884793194417 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385435343128 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159718772762 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436357873689 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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