Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Movies and television are one of the most important sources of entertainment for the young generation. There is a controversial issue that movies and television are more beneficial or harmful. I personally believe that the negative effects of watching movies are more than its positive effects, and I have two main reasons for my statement.
First, I think that television programs including talk shows, advertisements, news, etc. are subordinated by the governments and they are programmed to regulate or the people's lifestyle. In addition, they mostly try to normalize some new methods of lifestyle that are all at the governments' service and their aim. For instance, the issues which the promoting programs do pay to, try to force the audience's attention to focus on the particular matters. Also, they attempt to create new and mostly unnecessary needs for people and increase this sense. So people are encouraged to buy their products. If these promoting programs continue their approach, people will be a constant group of consumers and purchasers for their product. All of this is the result of the negative effects of television.
Second, I believe that movies and television are not good and beneficial sources of knowledge. It is a fact that every television program has a time limitation per day, even per month or year. Therefore, even the scientific and learning programs can not provide and present a complete and wide section of knowledge. On the other hand, books are the most accessible and complete source of knowledge that people can refer to this old kind friend and spend their time with the varied books.
All in all, I think that the negative effects of movies and television are more than their negative effects and I have two reasons for my belief. First, I think that television's programs try to change people's lifestyle and view to exploit their benefit in some ways like selling some types of products more than in the past. Also, the governments are going to take advantage of these programs for their long-term aims. Second, I believe that television and movies do not have the capacity to bring a complete section of knowledge to the audience. So people can use the books and replace them with television programs and spend their time with them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... they are programmed to regulate or the peoples lifestyle. In addition, they mostly try...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'audiences'' or 'audience's'?
Suggestion: audiences'; audience's
...ng programs do pay to, try to force the audiences attention to focus on the particular ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01315789474 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74574841328 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463157894737 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2990324932 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250934945402 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080909894034 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836954604584 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175672898853 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108113109536 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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