Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, gaining an education is one of the crucial things that we have to achieve in our life because it defines our future. With the competitive society, students should attend better universities to obtain valuable knowledge. So, I disagree with the statement and I feel this way for the following reasons.
First of all, obtaining education not only depends on the teachers, but also the environment where the student is studying. According to the research conducted by the experts, the state of the surrounding place greatly affects productivity. For example, when I was a college student, my university was inadequate, because there were no laboratories to research a project, nor there was an athletic stadium to support the student's activity. As a result, I could not require the skills that were required for the career I wanted to pursue. Also, the student will feel more comfortable, since people concentrate well on their comfort zone places. If I have attended a better school, I would not have had to find a job that I did not like.
Secondly, the quality of the education can be improved, if the university supports the individual development of the students, because it is vital for students to increase their efficiency to cope with the lessons. Many universities have extracurricular activities which the students can join depending on their skills. If there is a shy student who wants to increase their communication skills, he or she can join a debate club. In addition, the student's achievement can increase the reputation of the university, because it will attract more students from everywhere to apply to that university, which will, in turn, improve the university in many ways.
In conclusion, to improve the quality of the study, the university should focus on the sole development of the student and renovating the environment of the school. It is important to publicize the school and also to have more applicants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 422, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... was an athletic stadium to support the students activity. As a result, I could not requ...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...an join a debate club. In addition, the students achievement can increase the reputation...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0875 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99190966399 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534375 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8840650494 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152394607168 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548787565078 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605341033311 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107789660359 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447019970148 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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