Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend money on salaries university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the universities should spend money on salaries of their professors to improve the quality of education, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents may have the right to believe in that. I believe that the universities should increase the professors’ salaries to improve the education because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the technology today develops rapidly. So, the professors need a lot of money to improve themselves and follow the technology. If the professor gets high salary, he will be able to attend many conferences and different courses to increase their knowledge. Eventually, the professors will update their information. Additionally, that will make them more talents in their teaching ways.
Another point why I advocate that the universities must give good salary to their professor to improve the education quality is the hard life that we live in it today. The prices today raise rapidly and the people need to work long hours to earn enough money. If the professors get good salary from their work in the university, the will not work additional jobs. Eventually, their they will be able to get some rest during their day and that will have good impact on their role in the classes. Moreover, they will have more time to increase their knowledge.
Finally, it is a well-established fact, that good salary motivated the people to work hard. The competitions between people for a jobs today is high. If the professor gets good salary from his work, he will work hard to do his best in the class in order to keep his jobs. However, the bad salary makes the professor unconvinced and encourage them to looking for another job. Eventually, the university will loss the highly expertise professor.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw a conclusion which says that people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion, and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96632124352 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71271729757 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492227979275 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2422764352 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.85 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142903775364 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488309596148 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715063535594 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816222265464 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081658906617 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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