Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Some people state that for children growing up in the countryside is the best choice for parents to do. However, others think otherwise. They say that the best place for kids to grow is in a large city because pupils will have more chances and opportunities. In my opinion, growing up in a large city is definitely the best choice to make and I feel this way according stated in this article.
In a large city there are more opportunity waiting for kids and they will be certainly well positioned in such place. For example, the educational system in a big city is much better than in the country side. There are many option of elementary schools and for further education and it is likely that the kid will succeed with it. Another example happened to me, as I grew up in the large city, my parents had more choice to make for me to be well educated. Therefore, those examples elucidate that growing up in a big city is better than in a country side.
Moreover, the areas for entertaining are bigger in a city than in the country side. For instance, there are definitely more choices of entertainment to do, more shopping centers, parks, etc, and kids will have their time occupied almost 24/7. Another instance, I spent my entire childhood with my cousins and almost every weekend we were visiting shopping centers for films, we were also visiting amusement parks and, we were also involved in other kinds of activities. Thus, those instances illustrate that living in a big city is more important than in the country side.
Finally, I strongly believe that for pupils to grow up in a large community is the best choice because they will find more schools opportunities and more recreation places to be involved with.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66776315789 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57220646616 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5985700635 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250346387529 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105076740258 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652827764103 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164520816489 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596765610199 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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