Students used to study variety of subjects in first semister of university, but later on they select specialization in specific subject.
I personally believe having specialization is much better than broad Knowledge.
To begin, usually students dont have enough time to spend on different subjects , instead specialization enable students to enhance deeper understanding of specific area.
In addition , people has different capicity for istance, my specialization is finance , I can solve finance issue easily ,but im not able to deal with management issues.
Furthermore, having specific knowledge can help us to find related and well paid job. Organization need for specialize employee who can deal with different issues of specific departmend bring betterment to specific area.
To conclude, considering forementioned reasons having specialization is better because one can have deeper understanding of specific area and can easily find related and well paid job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 43.0788530466 12% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 143.0 407.700716846 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88811188811 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 4.48103885553 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24877100483 2.67179642975 122% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 212.727598566 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629370629371 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 618.680645161 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7187662141 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.285714286 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293266334128 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145484995076 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547882094996 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156509448442 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05704509307 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 10.9000537634 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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