Do you agree or disagree with the following statement, It is better to have lots of different friends than a few friends.
Friends are one of all those things that one person cannot miss in life. Is it better to have a lot of friends from different places than just having few friends? Some people are comfortable with a few close friends having similar habits and interest. However, I agree that it’s better to have many different friends. I believe that the benefits of having different friends are huge.
To begin with, a person’s life has many different phases and steps. We involve in various groups even just throughout a day. In each area, such as in school and at work, it’s not possible to fight and achieve goal alone. In school, friends can help your study and homework out; at work, close friends can help you with your project and cover you when it’s necessary. For example, when I was in college, I joined a cheer team, a guitar club and a play show, plus assignments and courses, sometimes it’s difficult to remember all the schedule. Luckily, I had some close friends in each area, they helped remind me of the next meeting date, the assignments and cleared my questions in regards to the study materials. I wouldn’t be able to have such a colorful and fulfilled school life without them. There are no doubt many more examples, but this is one sample that clearly shows how important it is to have many friends.
In addition, different friends can provide valuable knowledge and life experience to one person. In real life, it’s rare to find a person having 100% same background and life experience as ours to give us useful advice. However, by meeting different friends, we can learn a little bit from each one of them Take me as an example, if I want some suggestions of buying a new laptop, I ask my friend from college for some advice. I have difficulty organizing my group at work, I talk with friends from my previous work or someone I know they are doing very well at work. If I need advice or help in regards to a relationship, I talk to someone I can trust or study a similar area. Of course, it’s because they are all my close friends, they are all willing to help. We don’t walk to a random person to ask for a suggestion. All in all, the role each friend can play in giving us different experience is enormous.
To sum up, although there are many people who believe having fewer close friends are better, I disagree. I think that the benefits of having lots of different friends are tremendous. I strongly believe that everyone should try to make and have some close friends in different area.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
..., I agree that it's better to have many different friends. I believe that the benefits of...
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...To begin with, a person's life has many different phases and steps. We involve in various...
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Line 3, column 701, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...he assignments and cleared my questions in regards to the study materials. I wouldn't be...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...eting different friends, we can learn a little bit from each one of them Take me as an exa...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
... are doing very well at work. If I need advice or help in regards to a relationship, I...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... well at work. If I need advice or help in regards to a relationship, I talk to someone I can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, no doubt, of course, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65265486726 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56780075408 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480088495575 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5565736937 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.625 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297274660711 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100677965628 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10567513797 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228322980514 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130789412813 0.0645574589148 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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